热心网友
我没有时间帮你写简历。不过个人认为你的简历写的比较杂乱无章。建议你把你的技能,教育程度,个人成绩等分成类别，用一写Headings比较好。比如：educationcomputer skillsteamwork skillslearning skills 等等。格式很重要.这样方便别人阅读。而且会让人觉得你是这人比较Organized .相信我啦.我在加拿大很多年了,而且也学习过怎么写简历.
热心网友
I have a strong ability of adaptability and learning skills can easily acclimatize myself to the new circumstance and do everything on my own initiative。 I Have a sense of collectivity and am good at collaborating with my colleagues。 I Have a sonsy character and have an optimistic attitude toward the future, so I also do well in sociality and have a good relationship to the person around me。 In my leisure time I like sports such like basketball, badminton and jogging, all of these make me health, and I think according with the competition more and more impetuous health become one of the most important factors which will affect my career in the future。 Computer is another favorite to me。 Multimedia and sorts of applications let my study more and more interesting, more and more efficient。 Computer games also make me relax after an important work finished。 I have a strong passion for the internet of course, and I accumulate abundance of common sense。 It’s a summary about me but just a summary, if I have an honor to become one part of your company, I will show all about me to you。自己删除点吧 当时给同学写的。