这样翻译正确吗？
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He goes all out in his work.He's absorbed in his work.He's engaged in this job with his heart and soul. He dedicates himself to the job. 表达方法很多，仅举几例。
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Put all one's engry into it!
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很好
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我觉得"put all one's engry into it"更好一点
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put more efforts on
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put more energy into it
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我觉得把"power"改成 "effort" 更好一点。Put more effort into it.